Screenplay coverage and development notes. For a sample of notes, CLICK HERE.
Ghostwriting
Screenpwriting coaching - from idea to completion!
Online screenwriting courses
Book-to-screenplay writing
Phone consultations
Let's get started, shall we? Here's what we need:
Your screenplay must be 12 pt, courier, standard screenplay format. For screenplay sample page, CLICK HERE.
A self-addressed, stamped envelope (SASE) for the return of your script and critique. Use a 10 X 13 inch envelope or a "FLAT RATE PRIORITY MAIL" envelope with a stamp to cover the return postage, or a FedEx number. Please include e-mail in your contact information so we can confirm receipt of your screenplay.
A cashier's check or money order to cover the fee of the service for each script under 120 pages made out to Pneuma Entertainment LLC.
Or you may email your script as a PDF file and we can accept credit card payments through Pay Pal. If you use Pay Pal, your notes will be emailed to you and your screenplay will NOT be returned.
Print 2 copies of the "Release Form" - For Pneuma Release Form CLICK HERE. Read, sign and mail both copies with your script. We will then sign them, keep one copy and return the other copy with your script and notes. If you have emailed your screenplay and used Pay Pal, please FAX a signed copy of the release to (310) 861-0169, including a fax # where a signed copy can be faxed back to you.
Mail materials to:
Pneuma Entertainment, LLC 6245 Bristol Parkway #265 Culver City, CA 90230
TURNAROUND TIME: 2 WEEKS
7-DAY RUSH: ADD $40.00 3-DAY RUSH: ADD $60.00 NOTE: ALL COVERAGE BASED ON A 120 PAGE SCREENPLAY OR LESS. Over 120 pages is an additional $10.00 a page.
Treatment Notes -- $50.00 A script treatment is a very powerful tool. In some cases, it can be used to sell your idea if you have not yet completed your script. We will read your 1-20 page screenplay treatment and tell you if we think you have a strong idea, characters and story. We will tell you if we think this is an idea you can sell and offer suggestions on how to improve your chances to sell your idea and/or turn it into a great script.
Development Notes -- $150.00 2 page synopsis. Plus 3-4 pgs. of notes with analysis covering premise, your writing style, pacing, plot, structure, character and dialogue. Notes will be just like the studios, with suggested fixes of premise, structure and character. We will also tell you if we think you have a screenplay you can sell.
Full Development Notes -- $300.00 2 page synopsis. Plus 5-7 pgs. of notes with detailed analysis covering premise, your writing style, pacing, plot, structure, character, dialogue, production. In addition, you will receive page-by-page notes on suggested fixes of character, structure, dialogue and scenes. We will also tell you if we think you have a script you can sell and give suggestions about how to sell it. Includes a 1 HR. phone consultation.
Screenplay Consulting/Coaching -- $95.00/hour
Personalized writing coaching, with an action plan, excercises and continual input, to take your screenplay from idea to completion. We will give you a deadline (just like the studios do) and intensive, collaboration sessions with Camille and the Pneuma staff to ensure you meet your deadline.
Ghostwriting Services
Ghost Writing Appraisal - $75.00 Been toiling with the same script for years? Can't finish your Oscar winning masterpiece? We have a team of award-winning writers who can take your idea and write your script for you. First, we must review a one page write up of your idea to assess if it is something we think we can turn into a screenplay. This will be your Ghost Writing Appraisal. Once we complete the appraisal, if we think we can be of service to you, we will match you with a professional writer with credits, who write your script. You will receive a contract, an outline, a work schedule, a deadline and finally, a completed script. Once our services have been contracted, our fee will be made in 3 installments: 1) one-third at the beginning of services, 2) one-third upon your approval of script outline and 3) one-third upon delivery of your script. If we do not think we can be of service to you, we promise to be honest and let you know.
Ghostwriting/Complete Script - $90.00 per page
Ghostwriting/Script Rewrite - $60.00 per page
Ghostwriting/Script Polish - $45.00 per page
For example, writing services for a complete 110 page screenplay would be $9900.00, a rewrite $6500.00, a polish $4950.00.
*Note: Non-residents of California will work via phone and email. **Note: Cost may vary depending on genre of script-- i.e.: a period piece will cost more due to the research required.
